You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Madam: Good day! I’m writing to share with you my current situation with regard to
room
sharing. I am a bona fide student of
this
college institution. I am staying in a
room
suitable for four students. At
first
, I do not mind sharing rooms with others, but later on, it is challenging gor me to work on my school requirements. For the following reasons: one of my roommate Jane, love to play her speaker loudly,
then
Tessa keeps talking on her phone on loudspeaker, and Tonette love to bring her friends into the
room
. So, I do’t have a place to work and study peacefully. With
this
regard, I would like to transfer to a
room
that is
quiet, and with respectful roommates. A place that I’m comfortable with and clean. Hoping for a positive response on
this
matter. Thank you. Regards, Shella
Submitted by shellyfaith28 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: