To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?
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lead
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lack
of food supply so Correct article usage
a lack
insect
is one of Add an article
the insect
choices
to support Add an article
the choices
people
’s consumption. While some people
consider that nature will be interrupted by hunting lots of insect
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insects
also
its
is not healthy for eating. In Change the pronoun
it
this
essay, the advantages and disadvantages of consuming flies will be discussed as follow.
Pros of insect
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protein types so Change preposition
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it
can boost humans’ energy as much as Correct pronoun usage
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people
expectation
. Replace the word
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Moreover
, bugs
are less of a
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calories
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of calories
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human
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the humen
humen
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human
also
it’s appropriate for digestion. Hence
, insect
is edible things which come together with Add an article
the insect
an insect
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benefit. Add an article
a huge
For example
, people
who prefer to eat bugs
often get beautiful body shapes because of less fat and high protein. Therefore
, flies are one of the ways that can support the diet of humans.
Nevertheless
, consuming bugs
excessively can cause terrible problems because it has some substances that be able to block vitamin absorption in the body. In addition
, people
who got high blood pressure, diabetes, or some health condition will be in danger because of overwhelming protein. For instance
, bugs
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that are
are
fried with massive oil can increase double of fat for health. Unnecessary verb
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Thus
, it should be considered to consume this
kind of food because it still has some evil effects on our bodies.
To conclude, even though insect
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insects
get
colossal benefits to our health, Change the verb form
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it
should be concerned to eat in the correct way. Because Correct pronoun usage
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of
serious issues will happen to the physical functions. Eventually, I still won’t advise consuming it without having knowledge.Change preposition
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