HAPINESS IS CONSIDERED VERY IMPORTANT IN LIFE. WHY IS IT DIFFICLT TO DEFINE? WHAT FACTORS ARE IMPORTANT IN ACHIVING HAPPINESS?

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There is no doubt that everybody desires to be happy in life and to be cheerful differently from person to person.
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is not that easy.
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, I think,
happiness
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gains when maintaining people’s health and wealth and satisfaction and
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to be delighted in life. Defining
happiness
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is quite challenging because the requirements to achieve it
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, while someone dreams that his economic freedom would make him happy, a very rich man trying to gain about having a caring family to be happy.
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, a couple who
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not have any child is wishing to have a baby all the time and would be ready to do anything for that.
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, many poorer families, mostly in developing countries, find more children to be their burden. The practical world is quite puzzling and many people always want something more than they have. When a person’s aim or expectation is fulfilled, he wants more and
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process.
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always satisfaction has
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with
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life.
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, there are a few vital factors that are commonly believed to be happy in lives.
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of all, physical and psychological fitness is very important to have pleasure.
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, the community can truly realize that whenever they suffer from
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that increasing their sadness vastly. It is often said that being empty stomach appears dull face. Another crucial element is
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economic freedom and it leads to fulfil for life’s expectations and
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result
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people
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lifelong.
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, having a happy family where members love each other
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is considered important to be
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peace among family. In conclusion,
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that people have to have
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the difference
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each person, it
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on
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attitude and it can
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people’
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sound health and wealth
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caring
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family.
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