HAPINESS IS CONSIDERED VERY IMPORTANT IN LIFE. WHY IS IT DIFFICLT TO DEFINE? WHAT FACTORS ARE IMPORTANT IN ACHIVING HAPPINESS?

There is no doubt that everybody desires to be happy in life and to be cheerful differently from person to person.

This

is the main reason why defining

happiness

is not that easy.

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, I think,

happiness

gains when maintaining people’s health and wealth and satisfaction and

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to be delighted in life. Defining

happiness

is quite challenging because the requirements to achieve it

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not fixed.

For example

, while someone dreams that his economic freedom would make him happy, a very rich man trying to gain about having a caring family to be happy.

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, a couple who

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not have any child is wishing to have a baby all the time and would be ready to do anything for that.

On the contrary

, many poorer families, mostly in developing countries, find more children to be their burden. The practical world is quite puzzling and many people always want something more than they have. When a person’s aim or expectation is fulfilled, he wants more and

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is a

never ending

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process.

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is why

happiness

is not a simple word that

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always satisfaction has

relationship

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with

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life.

Nevertheless

, there are a few vital factors that are commonly believed to be happy in lives.

First

of all, physical and psychological fitness is very important to have pleasure.

For instance

, the community can truly realize that whenever they suffer from

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the sickness

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that increasing their sadness vastly. It is often said that being empty stomach appears dull face. Another crucial element is

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economic freedom and it leads to fulfil for life’s expectations and

as a

result

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people

are entertain

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their

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lifelong.

Moreover

, having a happy family where members love each other

as well as care for them

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is considered important to be

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peace among family. In conclusion,

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that people have to have

happiness

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the difference

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difference

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from

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each person, it

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on

person’s

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attitude and it can

be consider

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people’

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sound health and wealth

also

caring

their

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family.