HAPINESS IS CONSIDERED VERY IMPORTANT IN LIFE. WHY IS IT DIFFICLT TO DEFINE? WHAT FACTORS ARE IMPORTANT IN ACHIVING HAPPINESS?
There is no doubt that everybody desires to be happy in life and to be cheerful differently from person to person.
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happiness
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For example
, while someone dreams that his economic freedom would make him happy, a very rich man trying to gain about having a caring family to be happy. Linking Words
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a relationship
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, there are a few vital factors that are commonly believed to be happy in lives. Linking Words
First
of all, physical and psychological fitness is very important to have pleasure. Linking Words
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sickness
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, as well as care for them,
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person’s
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a person’s
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be considered
people’
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people’s
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