Some people think that government should spend money on building new train lines,while others believe that improving public transport is more beneficial.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is argued that authorities need spare more money on

train

lines ,while others believe that others modes of transportation

is

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more lucrative. Despite ,metro journeys being cheaper than

road

transport

inclined toward the latter statement because

this

mode of

transport

is very ubiquitous. some argue that the local regimes

need

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invest more money in the development of

train

paths. It is very obvious that developing

this

mode of

transport

is included a high budget,

although

it is cheaper to travel by

train

and safer than

road

transport

,

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availability of stations is limited to very few locations,

Thus

I believe that govt should spend more of the budget on developing the

road

transport

than the

train

. For ,example UK Metro stations are covered only 10 provinces while

roadways

are all over the country. On other hand Enhancing

Roadways

are more advantageous because , once

roadways

build they can be used for multiple purposes including private shipment, Bikes and cycle lanes.

furthermore

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with

roadways

local committees can implement toll tax which leads to

lucrative

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a lucrative

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business for Ruling authorities.

For example

In India with

Road

toll tax is collected on each trip, which leads to

collect

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the total investment which was spent on developing

roadways

. In conclusion,

Although

building

train

routes is beneficial to the public with cheaper and safer

transport

,

Road

transport

is much more beneficial with its wider usage and easy access.