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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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We are presented with
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 maps to compare the countryside, (
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wich
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 calls Stokeford), to analyze and describe the changes that have taken place over a period of eighty years. We can see that some buildings have kept their location. At the same time, it may be argued that as new objects have appeared, so old ones have been rebuilt. So, the general plan of the village has retained its outlines. We identify the analogous position of several objects: the river and the bridge,
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 have preserved their sizes;
then
 the main road, the Primary school, the Post office and some private housing. The number of constructions in Stokeford has become significantly increased.
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 we
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should
shoul
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two
 additional branches of the driveway. At the same time, for the development of
two
 minor roads, the three old residential
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private
privat
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private
 edifice and the
two
 shops apparently had to be demolished. It is
also
 obvious that the farm, namely the pasture, is no longer visible, as well as the territory of the Gardens. By the way, the Retirement home has come out in
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 place, which has grown due to the excrescence of the former Big House. By the way, the school has
also
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expanded
expansed
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expanded
 in size. Stokeford previously had
two
 shops. And
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obviously
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obviously
 they are absent in 2010.
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, there is one object , which is not named on the map, and it is surrounded by nine residential buildings. I would venture to guess that
this
 is a shopping mall. One way or another, I hope so. In general, it can be argued that during the comparison period there have been substantial changes in the settlement. At the same time, we can safely say that in the period of 8 tens years the population has several times redoubled.
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