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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience You should write at least 254 words.

#businesses #employees #lack #skills
In recent days, companies hiring new employees without any intellectual or communication skills.
This
 situation mainly affects organisations because of not
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 their
work
 on time. In
this
topic
, I am going to explain the causes and solutions relating to
this
 burning problem. First and foremost, many organisations recruit candidates without any practical knowledge of a particular
topic
 or technology.
Moreover
, they will not have experience because of recruiting them directly from their institutions. The main reason for
this
 is
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 a habit of shy communication and most people do not like to communicate with others because of their environment or not knowing about a particular
topic
 in detail.
For example
, young people coming from different countries to onboard would have shy or fear to engage with other people around them. The solution for
this
 main cause is to conduct or organise more interactive classes after joining and make a brief note on how to coordinate with friends, managers and clients when they are working on the project. The companies should provide
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 knowledge than theoretical knowledge in that particular technology and make them feel free in your organisation's environment.
For instance
, most companies organise training sections before they start to
work
.
To conclude
this
topic
. mine maintaining or following these solutions
work
 streams can improve their habit, of speaking or engaging with others. To make around
feel free
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 environment the leads
also
 should be friendly towards the employee and make their
work
 time.
This
 may help them to improve the status of many workplaces.
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