Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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shortage
of money is considered hard for many Correct article usage
a shortage
people
in society, and that's why a large part of them is giving up achieving some goals. Someone argued that is
important to maintain the perspective about life
while others support other perspectives. I'll expose my idea and discuss apply to both sides.
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behaviour
Thus
, many time the decision of changing is into of the individuum, so my role was creating
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to create
stimulus
for them believes in better perspectives. Correct article usage
a stimulus
For instance
, many people
are motivated by money and so I tried to teach him how be
more Add the particle
to be
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in
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sales
salles
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performance
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different scenarios.
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apply
other wise
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conduct
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conclusion, I can’t judge who choose Correct your spelling
In
this
lifestyle and they can accept unexpected salaries and position. On the other hand
, ambitious people
have to feel uncomfortable with the same situation. In fact, it depends about
what you want for your Change preposition
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite