Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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gives cheap and fresh energy.

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and more chance for war.

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not only affects Ukarian but all over the world facing pollution and notice temperature change.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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