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The pictures below shaow how tomato ketchup is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting he main features.

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The diagram illustrates the process of making tomato
ketchup
 which includes several phases. Overall, the process consists of fifteen stages, beginning with
tomato
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the tomato
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 picking step and the usage of
ketchup
 by consumers with a hamburger.
To begin
 with, picking and putting them in the basket is the
first
 stage
then
 they have sorted the best one, following
this
 the tomatoes are sent to the factory. In
this
 step, all useless parts
them
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apply
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such
 as
stalk
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stalks
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, seeds and skin are removed.
Then
, they are put in a special container to crush. In the seven-step, sugar, vinegar and salt are added to the product. After that, it is boiled on a stove and left free for two hours. Now, the
ketchup
 is ready to keep in bottles.
Subsequently
, after
labelling
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the labelling
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 stage, all bottles are checked by the quality control team,
next
, they are packed and delivered to the supermarkets to purchase by consumers.
Finally
, enjoy your hamburger and fries with a
ketchup
 sauce.
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