In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a posetive or negative situation?

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accommodation

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accommodation

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among

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. Somebodies reside in their own homes and the rest prefer to rent them.

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, buying a

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instead

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of renting it, in some

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of the world, is becoming

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crucial

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crucial

for individuals. In the following, I will explain not only some reasons why

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preference

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my point of view

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condition. On

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hand,

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of the most prevalent causes

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, why people try to purchase their own homes,

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people

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try to purchase their own homes is that if they rent a place, each year they probably must

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pay

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higher payment.

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, affording

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amount of expenditure can be difficult for them.

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country in which there is some inflation.

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of that,

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society every year is faced with some unaffordable expenses.

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,

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actually prefer to obtain their own homes. Another reason is that sometimes moving from

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place to another

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some hurdles to families, in

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are imposed

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them.

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, they intend to have

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consistent

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they are not obliged to

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the other hand, my take is on the side of

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for whom having

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is not considered

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an important concern. In my opinion, if parents want to afford the cost of the

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, they must work not only

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but

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excessively and

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situation deprives them

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spending enough time with their children,

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, in long run, I assume that they will become disillusioned and their quality of

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will not satisfy them. In conclusion of what aforementioned,

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having a

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can benefit families, they should pay some cost in

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way

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as working overtime and devoting less time to be with their acquisitions. To me, it is important that

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consider their budget and

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they commence seeking

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home

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to buy.