You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. Things to include: - Facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened. - Polite. No one responds to insults. - Outline what you wish from this. What do you want to happen? - Firmness. You want to be taken seriously.

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To the manager, I would like to express my regret for having dined at your establishment
last
night; please allow me to explain. I made a phone reservation two weeks in advance to celebrate a very special occasion with my wife. I requested a table by the window and a cake with a special message. Yet, upon our arrival, we were informed by the hostess that the table requested by the window is unfortunately not available and
instead
, they offered us a table near the kitchen.
In addition
to
this
, they didn’t prepare the cake with the special message as requested, which was extremely disappointing.
As a result
of
this
, I had intended not to pay,
however
, your staff informed us that they would not give us our car keys if we refused to pay, and so to avoid
further
embarrassment, I complied. The service was extremely unacceptable, and I would like to request a full refund of the amount paid. I would
also
suggest that your staff are trained to handle
such
situations in a more customer-friendly manner, and the restaurant should not promote experiences that they are unable to deliver. Regards, Houssam El Zein
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