You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. Things to include: - Facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened. - Polite. No one responds to insults. - Outline what you wish from this. What do you want to happen? - Firmness. You want to be taken seriously.

#restaurant #manager #money #facts #insults #outline #firmness

To the manager, I would like to express my regret for having dined at your establishment

last

night; please allow me to explain. I made a phone reservation two weeks in advance to celebrate a very special occasion with my wife. I requested a table by the window and a cake with a special message. Yet, upon our arrival, we were informed by the hostess that the table requested by the window is unfortunately not available and

instead

, they offered us a table near the kitchen.

In addition

this

, they didn’t prepare the cake with the special message as requested, which was extremely disappointing.

As a result

this

, I had intended not to pay,

however

, your staff informed us that they would not give us our car keys if we refused to pay, and so to avoid

further

embarrassment, I complied. The service was extremely unacceptable, and I would like to request a full refund of the amount paid. I would

also

suggest that your staff are trained to handle

such

situations in a more customer-friendly manner, and the restaurant should not promote experiences that they are unable to deliver. Regards, Houssam El Zein

Submitted by elzein.houssam on Sat Oct 29 2022

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

196 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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