You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. -You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year Write a letter to the couple. in your letter, • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Shikha, and I saw your advert regarding a requirement for a french language tutor for one year . I want to apply for

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job as I find myself suitable for

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job. I am a student who has been living in Australia for the

last

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years

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, and my course will take another 2

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to complete. So, I'll be here for the

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years

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definitely. I am basically from France so I know french very well. It is my official language.

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, I have experience

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of teaching kids, so I know their temperament and how to deal with them. I can

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take care of your house and can feed your children in your absence. Actually, I need

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job because I have to pay my college fees, so

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opportunity is good for me as teaching is my passion

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. So, I think I am perfect for the tutor you are looking for. I am available from tomorrow if we can schedule a meeting that would be great. We can discuss everything in detail. Looking forward to seeing you. Yours Sincerely, Shikha

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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