The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever. Discuss both points of view, and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary

world

, the

internet

has revolutionised the way

people

communicate with others

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and

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the education systems and various other parties.

Therefore

, today humans believe that

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is the mine to get information. Many

people

's opinions

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that

usage

of the

world

wide web should be limited and the opposing party consider that it should not be controlled no matter what happens.

However

, I agree with the latter part as misuse of

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can lead

people

to serious consequences. To commence with,

Internet

has the most un-censored

data

where

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people

all around the

world

rely on

internet

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the internet

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,

for

instance

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road systems, education, military document

data

etc is stored in the

world

wide web.

Therefore

limiting the

usage

of the

internet

for some users is important, if not the

world

has to face different issues

such

as cyber-attacks, where the

data

is leaked as well as scams. As an example, in a

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hospital the

data

of each and every patient is stored in a cloud network which is related to the net, what if a cyber attack happens? all the

data

will be leaked and

people

will no longer have access to that information, due to these reasons government should limit the

usage

.

On the other hand

, we learn and share facts, figures and other

data

through the web, and interrupting the

usage

of these

data

will affect many, mainly students and teachers.

Thus

most half of the

world

believes that information should be available to everyone at any time so that students can enhance their knowledge in education. To sum up, seeing the drawbacks of free

internet

usage

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government and other legal parties should implement laws and orders to protect the

world

.