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The plans below show a student accommodation buildings 2010 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

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The two maps illustrate how a learner's hostel was in 2010 and its contemporary state. Overall, there have been expansions of some structures
such
 as the
student
bedroom
 and part of the garden has been cleared,
however
, some structures remained unchanged. A close observation of the two maps shows that the garden at the West-wing of the
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living room
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livingroom
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living room
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 has been destroyed and converted into a
student
bedroom
, as well as the
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living room
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livingroom
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living room
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 which is now converted into a
student
bedroom
. Making the
student
bedroom
 five as compared with 2010 which were only three.
Furthermore
, the garden at the South of the map has been flattened and replaced
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with
wiyh
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with
 a car park to enable students with cars
be
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 comfortable.
Main
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The main
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 entrance, the hallway and
En-suite
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the En-suite
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 room remained unchanged. The kitchen at the East-wing of the map remained constant but now,
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the student
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student
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students
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 can go there for socialization. In all, there is not a massive change in
the
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student
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accommodation
accomadation
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accommodation
 between 2010 and now.
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