In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message

In some societies, people are saying to their

children

, they can achieve all of their

goals

just

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trying hard. There are some pros and cons That I will discuss in the forthcoming paragraphs. On the one hand,

this

approach has a positive benefit on

child’s

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a child’s

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motivation. To clarify, when a family admire

it’s

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kids

to

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for

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trying

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harder for their

goals

, the

results

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result

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of their effort is

success

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a success

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.

Consequently

, they are being

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motivated

motivaited

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motivated

and

this

is so positive for them.

For instance

, I remember when I was at school, I had a difficult exam which

it

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causes a lot of stress

for

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me.

However

, I faced

with

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that issue and tackled it, just

by

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through

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my parent’s admiration.

On the other hand

, the important disadvantage of

this

belief is keeping

children

away from reality and

give

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them some incorrect

perspective

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perspectives

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. It means in some cases parents do not consider the availability of a number of achievements that

they

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encourage their kids to reach those

goals

.

As a result

, young people feel

disappointment

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disappointed

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after that they can not reach

that

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their

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goals

.

Consequently

, parents should consider all the options before giving irrational motivation to their

children

.

For example

, I know a boy

of

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my extended family who wanted to be a

minsiter

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minister

but his father just gave him unreal detail without the difficulties of

this

goal. So, after he realized

this

dream is so hard, he became depressed. To conclude my essay,

Although

this

approach

bring

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brings

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some effective results for

children

to

recieving

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receiving

their ambitions, it should

paying

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attention to

accessibility

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the accessibility

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of a dream and goal. Due to

this

fact, there are some advantages and disadvantages and they have an equal effect on the results.