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The diagram explains the distribution of
families
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' weekly
income
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 on 8 different heads for two different years,
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 1968 and 2018. Overall, while food accounted for the highest weekly expenditure in 1968,
families
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 splurged the most on housing in 2008 on average.
In addition
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 to that, of all the expenditures,
families
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 spent roughly the same
income
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 each year on household
goods
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. Regarding the year 1968,
although
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 most
families
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 spent the minority of their
income
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 on fuel and power, household
goods
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, and personal
goods
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, they spent the majority of their
income
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 on food, housing, and fuel and power.
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, they spent nearly as much on leisure as they did on housing. As for the year 2008,
families
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 were spending more, on average, on leisure activities than housing, with 22% and 18% respectively.
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, about less than 5% of
income
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 is directed towards personal
goods
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, the least of all weekly expenses. The expenses of housing have doubled in the period.
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