LETTER OF APOLOGY Topic 3: You made a mistake in classroom. Write a letter to your teacher. In the letter: State your apology Describe the situation Write about your promise to change. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear sir I hope you are doing great in health and spirit. I want to let you know that I apply a mistake in the classroom. I am a student of computer programming at your college. I am good at my studies and performed well in all aspects. As you know we have a chart book in our class. I was reading that because I want to find an answer from the book. Suddenly, someone came into the classroom and scared me. Unfortunately, the book fell down and some pages were brust from one side. I was scared and put it back on the table and went out of the class. The

day, when you asked about it I lied.

Then

I realized that I made a mistake whether it was deliberate or not. I should tell you at the same time. I promise that I will not lie in future and will accept my mistake at the same time. Hope you will understand my situation and give me an apology. Regards, Nick

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Topic Vocabulary:

sincerest apologies
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acknowledgment
integrity
introspect
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