LETTER OF APOLOGY Topic 3: You made a mistake in classroom. Write a letter to your teacher. In the letter: State your apology Describe the situation Write about your promise to change. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear sir I hope you are doing great in health and spirit. I want to let you know that I apply a mistake in the classroom. I am a student of computer programming at your college. I am good at my studies and performed well in all aspects. As you know we have a chart book in our class. I was reading that because I want to find an answer from the book. Suddenly, someone came into the classroom and scared me. Unfortunately, the book fell down and some pages were brust from one side. I was scared and put it back on the table and went out of the class. The

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day, when you asked about it I lied.

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I realized that I made a mistake whether it was deliberate or not. I should tell you at the same time. I promise that I will not lie in future and will accept my mistake at the same time. Hope you will understand my situation and give me an apology. Regards, Nick

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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6 paragraphs

174 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

sincerest apologies
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acknowledgment
integrity
introspect
disruption
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amends
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LETTER OF APOLOGY Topic 3: You made a mistake in classroom. Write a letter to your teacher. In the letter: State your apology Describe the situation Write about your promise to change. Write at least 150 words.

You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing the work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working.

It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Tell us what has inspired you to become a teacher and tell us why you think teaching is a good career choice for you.