Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs. Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barret, I am writing

this

letter regarding the job advertisement for assisting you in doing house chores. As you mentioned that

this

is a part-time job and will be started

summer, I would like to apply for it. Since I enrolled in a gardening course, I have become professional to take care of your plant and make them flourish.

Additionally

, I have a certificate from an architecture academy which allows me to improve your home decoration and make the inside of your property more pleasant.

Finally

, I am able to handle simple tasks like doing dishes or cooking. The main point that would like to be hired on is to cover my accommodation cost and make a living.

Moreover

, I am studying at the university of UA which is located opposite your house.

That is

why I can be there whenever you are in need without spending commuting costs. For the working timetable, I would be available on all weekdays from 4 pm to 8pm.

Although

I prefer to have me-time at weekends, I will arrange to be there in case of an emergency. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Mohammad

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Domestic chores
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