) Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, In acknowledgement of your advertisement for the need for house help in the upcoming Summer, I would like to apply for that job. We live in the same town and I think my experience would be suitable for

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job if given an opportunity. I have worked as a caretaker of a physically disabled child for the past 3 years. There I used to make breakfast, clean the house, do the laundry and dishes, help with the school work and occasionally do the gardening too.

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, I can help you with almost any task I mentioned above and more if needed. I don’t have many classes during my summer semester, so I can utilize some time in saving some money for the fees

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year. I would be available from Wed to Sun as I have classes on Mon and Tue between 4pm to 8 pm. I would be willing to share references if needed. Hope to hear from you. Thank you. Sincerely, Kathy Carter

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

168 words

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