A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, • describe what this book was about, • explain how this book influenced you, • say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter in response to your call to readers to share their experience of the most impactful book. I am an avid reader interested in non-fictional books. I will share my views on one of my favourite texts of all time – My health is my wish by Dr Chetan Bhatiya.
This
writing is about adopting a healthy lifestyle by making minor changes in life. The author gives scientific explanations with conviction about the merits and demerits of different food.
Secondly
, not only
this
he talks about diet
,
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but
also
motivates you to do some light exercises which could be easily incorporated into one’s busy schedule. I was mainly influenced by it because I changed my morning routine by eating fruits as breakfast and drinking 4 glasses of water, which resulted in reducing my triglyceride level.
Besides
this
, I do not need to depend on medication for diabetes, bp, or triglyceride anymore after following the methods suggested by the author. I would recommend
this
book to anybody who wishes to live a disease-free healthy life.
Moreover
,I feel
this
book is likely to influence others as it includes real stories of experiences shared by some famous celebrities which are quite compelling. I hope my experience would be helpful to other readers. Thank you Regards, Kavita Senapati
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