Write about the following topic: Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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study practices play a vital role in their development. It has been observed that learning in

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school or tuition with peers is more efficient than learning virtually. Despite

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, I strongly vote against

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stance. I believe that grasping things online has its own benefits and helps to improve

students

' concentration. My preference will be elaborated

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the ensuing

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with valid reasons and examples.

Firstly

, studying at home allows the children to focus more on

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. The children can attend the lectures from their room surrounded by the environment, which probably has the best

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and gives comfortness to the

students

.

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may lead rise in their productivity and

hence

they can get the

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scores.

Furthermore

, due to any emergency if they would

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skipped the

class

, but still can get the recording of that

class

which

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them to cover the part of

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.

For instance

, there is a survey that depicts the overall improvement in the

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performance,

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a pandemic

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, due to online learning.

Besides

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, the

students

can ask questions without

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and learn topics in-depth. There is true that most of the

students

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not ask

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questions while classroom study because of

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hesitation.

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can be removed in

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online classes, which drastically

improve

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the study standards. To illustrate

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, there are a plethora of cases in my

class

only where some

students

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scared

making

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bond

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with teachers but they have

wipped

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wiped

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out

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fear through the online medium and one of them has even topped

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the

class

. To sum up,

although

, some individuals prefer the

rudimentry

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rudimentary

way of education, nowadays I feel that with

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advanced technology

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students

gain more benefits from virtual learning, which help them to focus more on the subjects. Apart from

this

, they can throw away their fear and master the topics.