Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Some
people
hold that moving to a completely new country in which they has
to communicate with the locals in their language may bring them various challenges. Personally, I agree with Change the verb form
have
this
idea. However
, I think there are some solutions that can help solve the problems,
and open a new world for Remove the comma
apply
people
living in a totally new environment.
Living in another country may lead to some troublesome social and practical dilemmas because it means people
are forced to use a language that they are not familiar enough for. For instance
, they may have huge difficulty in making new friends because of their limited expression ability and a lack of confidence. What's worse, there is the possibility that they may encounter a serious situation where they have to go to a doctor, but they can't make the doctor understand their sufferings and pains. Given that time is critical in coping with a patient with acute disease, an individual may lose his or her life in
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on
such
an occasion.
So it can not be denied that living in an unfamiliar country can bring people
much unexpected
trouble. Add a hyphen
much-unexpected
However
, there is no need to be too negative about it since helpful approaches can be found and applied. For one thing, it is essential that people
who decide to move to other countries should seize every opportunity to practice their speaking skills in advance. By doing so, they may feel less nervous about using a specific language. For another, some reliable translation apps such
as Youdao, Google and so forth should be made good use of, provided that an emergency should happen.
To summarize, although
people
living abroad may come across many unwanted social and practical challenges, they are sure to overcome them if they are well-prepared and know how to employ the existing technology.Submitted by linjun.su on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite