Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework. Do you agree or disagree?

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and home-related tasks are two crucial aspects of the educational systems in

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developed countries. While some families are trying to involve their

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as much as possible, I completely disagree with that opinion. I think, that approach results in some negative impacts on pupils,

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of independence and lower grades at school. In

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, If a father interrupts a youngster's home studies constantly, the

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's learning process would

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worsen due to that behaviour. A student

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to explore all related data for the

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by herself.

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, the student will be learned the curriculum's important features and useful scientific knowledge effectively.

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, in order to provide an efficient education stage

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away from their juveniles'

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, Japan's curriculum

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changed completely in the 1960s, and the

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amount of self-study

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and

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has increased significantly.

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of that, Japanese have become the most improved students in the globe.

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, the individual learning process and

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are linked to each other. If authorities or parents will decrease

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"independence", youngsters will be less self-assured people.

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, these kids will not learn how to deal with hardships in their upbringings due to the family involving factor. While some parents

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that If they consume more

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her lectures, she would be more

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been made by parents. To conclude,

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spending more leisure

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with her family is a good aspect of

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development, we have to teach our kids how to cope with our own problems. Due to its detrimental outcomes,

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as bad school grades and potential self-confidence issues, people should

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less

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