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In some places, workers are required to retire at a specific age. In other places, workers can retire when they choose. In your opinion, should there be a mandatory retirement age for all workers?

#places #workers #age #retirement
Workers
 could
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be
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required to retire
in
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at
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 the
moment
 that wanted or how at some place, do choose
of
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the
moment
. I believe that there mandatory
retirement
age
 and
workers
 can
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decide
todecide
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decide
to decide
 retire or after
this
,
work
 or retire.
Firstly
, the
workers
 can have conditions of deciding in a
moment
 sure of retired of the
work
 at a specific
age
.
Second
, Some
work
 insalubre how Farm, petrol, and teachers, among others should there be a mandatory
retirement
age
, because
the
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 situation of the
work
 and reduce the period of
retirement
. Thirsty, some people have specific
age
 to
retirement
, but, have functions important in their companies or lead projects where your person is important. Few people arrived retired
age
 with terrible health and should be retired before, but, needed to stay with
age
 required to retire. In conclusion, can assume that
workers
 could retire when after mandatory to
decide
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todecide
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 choose the
moment
 of
retirement
 in the function of their situation of health or responsible in their job. The companies could give the best conditions for leads doing they want to stay for more time in their
work
 and contributions to news
workers
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mandatory retirement age
  • progression
  • age discrimination
  • standardizing
  • workforce diversity
  • invaluable knowledge
  • expertise
  • motivated workforce
  • healthcare improvements
  • lifespans
  • physical demands
  • mental demands
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