Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In about 300 words, give examples to support your ideas.

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Nowadays,

brand

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endorsement is quite common

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kind

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of platforms

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as television, social media and so on.

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of people hold the

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belief

, advertisements are remarkably inducing us to purchase various products. Others argue

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apply

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products

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product

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marketing

are

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prevelant

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prevalent

that it can not influence most

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apply

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the

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individuals. From my

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, I have

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later

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view and I

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former

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, companies are adopting

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attention

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attention

seeking marketing strategies.

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, brands are adopting various policies which are providing them huge exposure,

as a

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result

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these are able to draw more and more attention from

general

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public and

influencing

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influence

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there

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their

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spending habits.

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, online shopping brands like amazon,

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eBay

ebay

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and ebay

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have signed

the

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endorsement contract with youtube, which gives these brands profound publicity,

as a

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result

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they are increasing their revenue

everyday

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, commercialization

are

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becoming more and more ubiquitous

that

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and

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humans can not ignore these as these are captured

all

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by all

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forms of media and platform.

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, one can

found

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find

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advertisement poster not only

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public

transports

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transport

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, roads and

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apply

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office

building

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buildings

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but

also

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witnesses them at social media, television and radio.

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, promotional activities not only

influencce

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influence

influences

an individual's conscious

mind

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but

also

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sub-conscious

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the sub-conscious

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mind

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. To be more specific, an attractive promotional act is able to impact a person's subconscious

mind

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in a way that

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whenever

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when ever

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whenever someone

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some one

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someone

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goes to purchase a

product

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, they

pickup

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pick up

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the exact

product

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from the isle which have been portrayed

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the advertisement

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without

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with out

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without

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thinking much about the

adverisement

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

341 words

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