Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In about 300 words, give examples to support your ideas.

Nowadays,

brand

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the brand

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endorsement is quite common

in

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on

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all

kind

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kinds

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of platforms

such

as television, social media and so on.

Number

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of people hold the

beleive

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belief

, advertisements are remarkably inducing us to purchase various products. Others argue

,

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products

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product

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marketing

are

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is

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so

prevelant

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prevalent

that it can not influence most

of

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apply

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the

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individuals. From my

perspectives

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, I have

disaproval

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disapproval

for

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the

later

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latter

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view and I

am agree

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with

fromer

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former

statement.

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with, in

recent

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era

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, companies are adopting

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attention

atention

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attention

seeking marketing strategies.

In other words

, brands are adopting various policies which are providing them huge exposure,

as a

result

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these are able to draw more and more attention from

general

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the general

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public and

influencing

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influence

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there

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their

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spending habits.

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, online shopping brands like amazon,

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eBay

ebay

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and ebay

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have signed

the

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endorsement contract with youtube, which gives these brands profound publicity,

as a

result

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,result

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they are increasing their revenue

everyday

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.

Besides

, commercialization

are

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is

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becoming more and more ubiquitous

that

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and

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humans can not ignore these as these are captured

all

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by all

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forms of media and platform.

For instance

, one can

found

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advertisement poster not only

at

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on

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public

transports

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transport

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, roads and

at

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apply

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office

building

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buildings

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but

also

witnesses them at social media, television and radio.

Additionally

, promotional activities not only

influencce

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influence

influences

an individual's conscious

mind

but

also

sub-conscious

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the sub-conscious

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mind

. To be more specific, an attractive promotional act is able to impact a person's subconscious

mind

in a way that

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whenever

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when ever

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whenever someone

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some one

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someone

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goes to purchase a

product

, they

pickup

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pick up

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the exact

product

from the isle which have been portrayed

on

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in

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the advertisement

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without

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with out

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without

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thinking much about the

adverisement

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advertisement

advertisements

.

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, If someone wants to buy a

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toothpaste

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tooth paste

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toothpaste

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, from numerous brand he will choose the

product

which

have

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been in his subconscious

mind

. On top of that, companies endorse information regarding discounts with their promotion which draw

peoples'

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people's

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attention and they got a good deal within their budget. To conclude,

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although

althogh

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although

, advertisement influence people to buy things ,

but

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apply

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sometimes

it

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they

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also

provide

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provides

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useful information about goods which help individuals to choose the

product

accprding

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according

to their

need

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needs

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.