Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, prefer to take risks and think that change is a positive thing. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

In the recent global and volatile world, the priorities and values of life
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by
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high
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level, there are two groups of individuals, one being satisfied with what they have and do not want to alter it, and the other segment who are willing to change
this
, even if it means
to take
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risks and
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out of their comfort zones. I will discuss both views and talk
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idea, which I believe we all need to take
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level
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of risks to grow and contribute to the
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society
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society
. The
first
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group
grouop
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group
of
people
are those who refuse changes and live in peace within the limit of
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environment. We see those
people
quite often in our daily lives.
For example
, there are
people
who are protective and
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satisfied with
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quo. For them, peace of their
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are
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the most valued
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and fame or wealth
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not something they pursue.
Hence
, they do not lose big,
however
, they do not gain much.
As a result
, their lives lack dynamism.
On the other hand
, there are men and women who are willing to step outside of their comfort zones in order to evolve. As
such
, those
people
are not afraid of uncertainties and even if they sometimes face challenges, they think these are the necessities for their evolution. Their priorities are growth, world fame, meeting more
people
, expanding their sphere, and changing for the better. As a consequence, they sometimes significantly be defeated,
however
, they can learn from the experience and can gain huge accomplishments. I believe the latter group's way of life is better, as human
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historical developments have been always led and supported by those leaders. We are here to change
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society for the better and work for the happiness of others. In conclusion, there are two types of thinking towards
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risk taking
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and what is important in our lives. As we saw in the above discussion, the two groups have totally different value propositions which are difficult to be mingled.
However
, I personally believe that each of us needs to take risks within our own capacity and try to change the world for the better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • preference
  • routine
  • stability
  • change
  • risk
  • positive
  • uncertainty
  • familiarity
  • comfort
  • security
  • resistance
  • negative consequences
  • personal growth
  • development
  • desire
  • opportunities
  • adapt
  • thrive
  • environment
  • embracing
  • potential benefits
  • balancing
  • fulfilling life
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