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Some people say that now Is the best time In history to be living. What Is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

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From the beginning of mankind, the best
time
 for living always came under discussion.
People
 debated which
time
 is best for living.
This
 essay will discuss how the present
time
 is best for living, and which part of history was best to live in. The current era considers the age of the technological revolution that influenced human
life
 greatly. With keeping
this
 in mind, the present
time
 is best to live in, from medical advancement to innovation in medicine helping
people
 to live a long and healthy
life
 without worrying
of
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 diseases. Children are vaccinated to counter some deadly viruses that caused many deaths in the past. One more and widely debated reason is the internet, which changed the way of
life
 of
people
; nowadays, the internet made everything
life
 so easy.
For example
, all financial activities can be performed from the comfort of home. Distances are no more affecting lives because of digital platforms; anyone can contact their loved ones anytime from any part of the world. So according to me, all the above points support the argument that the present
time
 is best for living. As the above paragraphs mentioned about the current
time
 there could be another
time
 in history when
life
 was so good. In ancient roman times, society respects the person who has good character; that society was free of
people
 who considered money as everything. At that
time
,
people
 always consider society more than themselves so, we can say that
time
 was good because
people
 live like a family. Social
life
 was at its peak
people
 spend their spare
time
 in gatherings of the local community. Everybody knew who live
next
 to their door, and everybody was ready to help in need. Quality of
life
always
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 important for human beings, present
time
always
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is always
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 good from past
time
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times
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 in rare cases some old times
also
 consider best in some sort.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unprecedented
  • prosperity
  • technological advancements
  • global connectivity
  • longevity
  • opportunities
  • self-expression
  • renaissance
  • exploration
  • industrial revolution
  • roaring twenties
  • unparalleled
  • groundbreaking
  • transformative
  • revolutionary
  • epoch-making
  • flourished
  • transcended
  • innovations
  • distinguished
  • renaissance artists
  • explorers
  • innovative entrepreneurs
  • exhilarating
  • era
  • unforgettable
  • boom
  • vibrant
  • exuberant
  • transformed
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