An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays, increasing rates of educational institutions

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offer

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electrical devices to use in school,

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of traditional papers .

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that saving time, effort, and materials are the biggest advantages, but

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health problems are the primary disadvantage. The major pros of using technological devices are saving time, work, and matters that can be wasted if typical papers are used. The main reason given to support

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claim is that books and printed materials are made up of wood, which takes many stages in the factory to be produced

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then

gets distributed to pupils .

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, while printed exams require teachers’ attention and take many days to be marked,

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exams can be marked in

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minutes.

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, using these technological advances is important for both nature and teachers. Despite these advantages,

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can lead

students

to various health effects.

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spending hours

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studying via tablet can cause fatigue.

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, it can affect their eyes and weaken their

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.

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after

require

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students

to use laptops, 1 in 3

students

got sight difficulties and were advised by the doctor to wear glasses. In conclusion, using technology is advantageous because it saves

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natural resources and

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time and

efforts

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;

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, it could

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with

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physical and

eyes

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problems.

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, using them is beneficial but should be

moderately

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and carefully.