Some people believe that the most important aspect of their job is their salary. Others think that the job itself is the most important. What do you think is the most important aspect of a job? Include specific details and examples to support your choice

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workers

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indicate that

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is one of the most significant things in their

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. Other

workers

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argue that the

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's characteristic is more important compared to the

salary

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. According to me , a

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's feature is supposed to become the

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critter when humans choose their

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. Two basic factors push me to think like these.

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,

workers

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spend at least half of their day in the

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.It is part of their social

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.

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, even if they earn limited money,

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if

different types of development

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are found within the company it can provide them pleasure. During the course of human

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, about 20-30

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is spent in working place.It is an

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number ! With

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rate,

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is clear that

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can not separate their daily

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and

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life

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.From morning to night,

workers

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stay at the

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.Most of them, come

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before sunning up and turn back

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home with night's darkness.

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except

time spent

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, only limited time humans have in their special

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. İn that case,

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should find a different way to make their

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life

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enjoyable.

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or other materialistic factors do not ensure long-term motivation.Surveys show that human relationships and social bonds are the

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first

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elements of happiness. Drinking coffee or tea with co-

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is able to create a positive impact on the

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atmosphere. It is like a butterfly effect. Small connections make big difference and pleasure. Some

companies

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can not give their

workers

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a huge number of money. But

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of

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, these

companies

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ensure their worker's development

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as trips, education ... Especially, young people are supposed to pay attention to

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kind of offer.At the beginning of

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life

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, a high

salary

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may become attractive in the eyes of young people.But as time rolls on, they will understand that

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itself does not provide

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satisfaction alone.

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satisfaction is a more complicated issue.To , exemplify

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case, assume that two people. The

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person

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has a high

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but every single day he exposes to mobbing and manages useless things. The

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person

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, earn lower money but through

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,

opportunities

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he improves himself.

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as he goes abroad or

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different types of organizations... Which

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will have

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satisfaction long-term? According to me the

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person

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in the long term.

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,

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characteristics have an important role in being happy in the

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environment.Social surroundings and

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given by

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are the

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elements when humans choose jobs.