You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Macham, I am writing an article published in

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letter in reference to the number of articles published in

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week's edition of your

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about the high number of car accidents in Mars

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regret to inform you that

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information about the

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is wrong Mars

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is quite a nice

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with a Borinating nature. It

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has whales and well-flared steel and roads. In your ,

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you reported that there are at least ten car accidents per day and & three of them are usually fatal t. I found

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shocking as after Sixteen years of living here, I cannot recall that

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saw a single accident. I

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checked with the traffic police department and confirmed that there is only a record of five accidents since the beginning of the year. I appreciate the effort the

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team is putting is putting in ;

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, publishing misleading information would lead to catastrophic results. A Big portion of the

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's economy depends on tourism.

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,

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articles can affect negatively people's lives! I would really appreciate it if the

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would fix

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mistake, by publishing, an apology and the right numbers.

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, it would be beneficial to keep nicely reporting about the

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and sightseeing in it, which would counter

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week's piece article's effect -Please give

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matter your immediate attention. -Yours faithfully - John Wick