You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Macham, I am writing an article published in

this

letter in reference to the number of articles published in

last

week's edition of your

magazine

about the high number of car accidents in Mars

city

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regret to inform you that

this

information about the

city

is wrong Mars

city

is quite a nice

city

with a Borinating nature. It

also

has whales and well-flared steel and roads. In your ,

magazine

you reported that there are at least ten car accidents per day and & three of them are usually fatal t. I found

this

shocking as after Sixteen years of living here, I cannot recall that

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saw a single accident. I

also

checked with the traffic police department and confirmed that there is only a record of five accidents since the beginning of the year. I appreciate the effort the

magazine

team is putting is putting in ;

however

, publishing misleading information would lead to catastrophic results. A Big portion of the

city

's economy depends on tourism.

Accordingly

,

such

articles can affect negatively people's lives! I would really appreciate it if the

magazine

would fix

this

mistake, by publishing, an apology and the right numbers.

In addition

, it would be beneficial to keep nicely reporting about the

city

and sightseeing in it, which would counter

last

week's piece article's effect -Please give

this

matter your immediate attention. -Yours faithfully - John Wick