Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it cost. How true is this statement? What influences people when they buy food?
In the present
day
, the economy fluctuates. shifts of many factors. For instance
, The war between Russia and Ukraine made the cost of goods to produce food
increase and the financial crisis in many countries in this
day
; affects personnel expense payments from
inflation and trade war. The reason is made the living expenses are higher than in the past before COVID-19 disease occurred, changing the mindset of Change preposition
due to
families
when they decide to consume everything.
According to
the situation on this
day
, many families
want to save their money much as they can for the future. Which means they might calculate every expenditure that is
dependent. This
means the price of the meal is important for the household. Some families
decide to consume instant noodles too much because it's very cheap and easy to cooking
but they Replace the word
cook
didn’t
think about the effect on their well-being in the future. Wrong verb form
don’t
While some
Correct word choice
Some
families
choose to cook by themselves because the cost of ingredients is cheaper than you order on the delivery platform and it can save money on delivery costs too.
On the other hand
, people
try
to choose to consume healthy Wrong verb form
tried
food
rise for the past even in
Change preposition
apply
this
day
the economy is
decreased because they realise that good health is Verb problem
has
important
as household finances. Every year Rephrase
as important
people
died
from cancer Wrong verb form
die
increasing
because consumer behaviour impacts personal health like eating too much SodiumVerb problem
apply
include
in Verb problem
apply
food
such
as potato chips, instant noodles, and grilled pork belly. The reason makes people
change their behaviour to have
healthier. Verb problem
be
For example
, eating too many vegetables and fruit, controlling the volume of meals that should be consumed each day
and exercising.
To conclude
, many people
want to revolutionise consumer behaviour. That makes the factor
to decide eating are changed by the nutrition of Fix the agreement mistake
factors
food
and the component
in the Fix the agreement mistake
components
food
. Even though money is very important for everyone but
personal health should Correct word choice
apply
become
first.Verb problem
come
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