Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and work of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that
people
can see historical monuments and work
of Fix the agreement mistake
works
art
by using computer
.
So that there is no need Add an article
the computer
a computer
of
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for
art
galleries
and public museums
. From my point of view
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,view
i
disagree with Change the capitalization
I
this
opinion. Art
galleries
and museums
have a lot of benefits such
as understanding the cultural aspects of a country and experience
the beauty of the visited place.
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experiencing
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of all
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,all
i
feel that if you need an Change the capitalization
I
experience
of Correct your spelling
fulfilment
fullfillment
while seeing a historical object and work of Correct your spelling
fulfilment
art
then
you should visit that particular place or museum where the artefact is kept. Because seeing the
ancient objects and Correct article usage
apply
work
of Fix the agreement mistake
works
arts
through Fix the agreement mistake
art
the
computers will not give you full satisfaction as you see Correct article usage
apply
it
directly with your naked eyes or Correct pronoun usage
them
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visiting
visting
that particular place where the artefacts are kept Correct your spelling
visit
such
as museums
and art
galleries
. For
example
if Add a comma
,example
the
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apply
people
are trying to experience
the beauty of tajmahal
through computers by watching a video or seeing a picture. The real beauty of its marbles and the size of the monument. Change the capitalization
Tajmahal
taj mahal
These kind
of features cannot be experienced. Change the determiner
This kind
These kinds
Hence
, it is clear that art
galleries
and historical museums
are important for the
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people
to have a better experience
.
Secondly
, museums
helps
in educating the history and culture of a country. So Change the verb form
help
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visiting
visting
the historical places or Correct your spelling
visiting
museums
of Correct your spelling
different
diffrent
countries helps Correct your spelling
different
people
to understand the cultural aspects, languages and more about a country. Like if you are Correct your spelling
visiting
visting
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visiting
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British
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a biritish
biritish
museum it documents the story of human culture from its beginning to the present. So Correct your spelling
British
this
helps us to understand the changes Correct your spelling
occurred
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that occured
occured
in human Correct your spelling
occurred
beings
cultural aspects,languages, behaviour and more.
In Change noun form
beings'
being's
conclusion
it is clear that historical monuments and Add a comma
,conclusion
art
centres are much more important and useful. It helps people
to have experience
with complete Correct your spelling
fulfilment
fullfillment
and helps to understand the major changes Correct your spelling
fulfilment
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occurred
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that occured
occured
from the beginning to the presentCorrect your spelling
occurred
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