Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and work of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?

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can see historical monuments and

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by using

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. So that there is no need

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art

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galleries

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and public

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disagree with

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opinion.

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galleries

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and

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have a lot of benefits

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as understanding the cultural aspects of a country and

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experience

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the beauty of the visited place.

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feel that if you need an

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of

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fulfilment

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fulfilment

while seeing a historical object and work of

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you should visit that particular place or museum where the artefact is kept. Because seeing

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ancient objects and

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of

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through

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computers will not give you full satisfaction as you see

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directly with your naked eyes or

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visiting

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visit

that particular place where the artefacts are kept

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as

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and

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galleries

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example

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if

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people

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are trying to

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the beauty of

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through computers by watching a video or seeing a picture. The real beauty of its marbles and the size of the monument.

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of features cannot be experienced.

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, it is clear that

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galleries

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and historical

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are important for

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people

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to have a better

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.

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,

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helps

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in educating the history and culture of a country. So

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visiting

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visiting

the historical places or

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of

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different

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different

countries helps

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to understand the cultural aspects, languages and more about a country. Like if you are

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visiting

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biritish

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museum it documents the story of human culture from its beginning to the present. So

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helps us to understand the changes

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occurred

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that occured

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occured

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cultural aspects,languages, behaviour and more. In

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it is clear that historical monuments and

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centres are much more important and useful. It helps

people

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to have

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with complete

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fulfilment

fullfillment

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and helps to understand the major changes

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occurred

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occured

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occurred

from the beginning to the present