Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and work of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that
people
can see historical monuments and works of art
by using the computer.
So that there is no need for art
galleries
and public museums
. From my point of view, I disagree with this
opinion. Art
galleries
and museums
have a lot of benefits such
as understanding the cultural aspects of a country and experiencing the beauty of the visited place.
First
of all, I feel that if you need an experience
of fulfilment while seeing a historical object and work of art
then
you should visit that particular place or museum where the artefact is kept. Because seeing ancient objects and works of art
through computers will not give you full satisfaction as you see them directly with your naked eyes or visit that particular place where the artefacts are kept such
as museums
and art
galleries
. For ,example if people
are trying to experience
the beauty of Tajmahal through computers by watching a video or seeing a picture. The real beauty of its marbles and the size of the monument. These kinds of features cannot be experienced. Hence
, it is clear that profession
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galleries
and historical museums
are important for people
to have a better experience
.
Secondly
, museums
help in educating the history and culture of a country. So visiting the historical places or museums
of different countries helps people
to understand the cultural aspects, languages and more about a country. Like if you are visiting British
museum it documents the story of human culture from its beginning to the present. So Correct article usage
a British
this
helps us to understand the changes occurred
in human Correct pronoun usage
that occurred
being's
cultural aspects,languages, behaviour and more.
In conclusion, it is clear that historical monuments and Fix the agreement mistake
beings'
art
centres are much more important and useful. It helps people
to have experience
with complete fulfilment and helps to understand the major changes occurred
from the beginning to the present.Correct pronoun usage
that occurred
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