Your landlord is asking to increase the rent. Write a letter to him.

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Daniel, Trust you are doing well.

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is Jia Ashitta, residing in Flat No 1403, Continents tower, which is one of your rented properties in Jumeirah Village Circle. I have been a tenant in

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apartment for more than 4 years now. I am writing in

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to the 25% rental increment put forward by your team.

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, I'd like to thank you and the team for the exceptional service, I am a happy resident so far. I have been agreeing to 10% Y-o-Y rental in the past 4 years, as is the industry standard in

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community.

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steep increase of 25% came as a surprise. Since there were no major upgrades done or planned

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communicated to us, I don't feel the increment is justified. I am sure you are well aware that the supply is more in the community, every year there

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new apartments being made available for attractive prices. I am a loyal tenant and would like to continue here as we've made memories here as a family.

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, if the increment is more than the yearly average of 10%, I'll have to consider looking at other options as it would go over my budget. I appreciate your understanding and look forward to hearing from you with positive feedback. Best Regards, Jia

Ashitta

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Ashita

Submitted by atjia27 on Sun Oct 30 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

222 words

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