Your landlord is asking to increase the rent. Write a letter to him.

Dear
Mr.
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Daniel, Trust you are doing well.
This
is Jia Ashitta, residing in Flat No 1403, Continents tower, which is one of your rented properties in Jumeirah Village Circle. I have been a tenant in
this
apartment for more than 4 years now. I am writing in
regards
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to the 25% rental increment put forward by your team.
Firstly
, I'd like to thank you and the team for the exceptional service, I am a happy resident so far. I have been agreeing to 10% Y-o-Y rental in the past 4 years, as is the industry standard in
this
community.
However
,
this
steep increase of 25% came as a surprise. Since there were no major upgrades done or planned
that is
communicated to us, I don't feel the increment is justified. I am sure you are well aware that the supply is more in the community, every year there
are
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new apartments being made available for attractive prices. I am a loyal tenant and would like to continue here as we've made memories here as a family.
However
, if the increment is more than the yearly average of 10%, I'll have to consider looking at other options as it would go over my budget. I appreciate your understanding and look forward to hearing from you with positive feedback. Best Regards, Jia
Ashitta
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Ashita
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