Your landlord is asking to increase the rent. Write a letter to him.

Dear

Mr.

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Daniel, Trust you are doing well.

This

is Jia Ashitta, residing in Flat No 1403, Continents tower, which is one of your rented properties in Jumeirah Village Circle. I have been a tenant in

this

apartment for more than 4 years now. I am writing in

regards

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to the 25% rental increment put forward by your team.

Firstly

, I'd like to thank you and the team for the exceptional service, I am a happy resident so far. I have been agreeing to 10% Y-o-Y rental in the past 4 years, as is the industry standard in

this

community.

However

this

steep increase of 25% came as a surprise. Since there were no major upgrades done or planned

that is

communicated to us, I don't feel the increment is justified. I am sure you are well aware that the supply is more in the community, every year there

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new apartments being made available for attractive prices. I am a loyal tenant and would like to continue here as we've made memories here as a family.

However

, if the increment is more than the yearly average of 10%, I'll have to consider looking at other options as it would go over my budget. I appreciate your understanding and look forward to hearing from you with positive feedback. Best Regards, Jia

Ashitta

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Ashita

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
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therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

222 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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