Some people think that product should be made to last as long as possible, while others think making the product cheap is more important. Discuss both views and express your opinion.
The market is loaded with a variety of products to choose from. While durability is
main
goal for some manufacturers ,the other half focuses on making it affordable for the common man. In Change the article
the main
this
essay, I will be discussing how both, a longer self-life and a cheaper price makes
the Correct subject-verb agreement
make
product
ideal in its own way but when choosing one of them, the cost effectiveness
surpasses the benefits of Add a hyphen
cost-effectiveness
longevity
of any given Add an article
the longevity
product
.
The more Add a hyphen
long-lasting
long lasting
the Add a hyphen
long-lasting
product
is, the lesser is
the pollution caused by waste generated. Every item bought, has to be discarded after it wears and tears off, expires, Unnecessary verb
apply
Correct word choice
or looses
looses
its function, purpose or viability . If it happens too soon, the management of all the Replace the word
loses
wastes
produced, can Fix the agreement mistake
waste
creative
a load on the planet. Replace the word
create
For instance
,Due to frequent
accumulation of waste and Correct article usage
the frequent
unavailability
of ways to tackle them, there is Correct article usage
the unavailability
steep
rise in the number of landfills throughout the world. Longer durability can help Add an article
a steep
the steep
in
significantly Change preposition
apply
reducing
the amount of trash generated, Wrong verb form
reduce
hence
lowering the burden of waste management making it a sustainable option.
Cheaper goods are accessible. The lesser the price, the more widespread use of that product
becomes possible. More and more consumers can benefit from having a cheaper, pocket- friendly
alternative. Correct your spelling
pocket-friendly
For example
, Low cost is even more crucial for the people of developing countries where a major part of the population is below below
poverty life. Not every person is affluent enough to purchase an expensive item so Remove the redundancy
apply
affordability
of any Add an article
the affordability
product
increases the domain of buyers.
The main goal of the manufacturing industry should be finding a balance between the price and the longevity of any good. But, affordability
outweighs the fight between the two because, if people wouldn’t be
able to afford it they will not be able to buy it. Unnecessary verb
apply
This
will in
turn, increase the cost of Add the comma(s)
,in
product
even Add an article
the product
a product
further
making it a luxury which not every socio-economic strata
will be able to afford. Change to a singular noun
stratum
Thus
, to benefit maximum
Correct article usage
the maximum
people
Correct quantifier usage
number of people
affordability
is quite crucial. In conclusion, affordability
can help the product
to become popular, reach door-to- door
and benefit every person, be it rich or poor.Add a hyphen
door-to-door
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