A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, . describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team . summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts . say how you think the company should spend the money

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing

this

letter to share my views about

to choose

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between a sponsor for a

team

and Open-air concerts.

Firstly

, I want to mention

about

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the present status of

local

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the local

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Children's sports

team

. The

team

has won a tournament recently conducted by the state council recently. Previously, the same

team

has

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won two local tournaments in the

last

year. If your company spends money

to

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on

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this

team

for coaching, improving on-field conditions to practice and required individual facilities. The

team

's performance will be much better than now. Open-air Concerts bring a different kind of environment to the community. It allows people to gather at one place to watch and eat something with all the neighbourhood at one location.

Finally

, I want to conclude that Company should divide the money by 70 %for the sports

team

and the remaining 30 % for the Open-air concerts. If possible, please consider my requests and implement them. Yours Sincerely, Niranjan Reddy K.