IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 2.5

In the future nobody will buy printed news paper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

#future #nobody #news #paper #books
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Buying paper
books
Use synonyms
 have been important for so many
people
Use synonyms
 throughout the decades.
Likewise
Linking Words
, the printed newspaper which was the purpose of it to stay updated about the previous economic, political and social news. In the current modern life, it can be better to read online which is offered in so many formal references, so in
future
Add a comma
,future
show examples
 it is expected that
people
Use synonyms
 will prefer to use more practical ways to know what happened around them. Reading
books
Use synonyms
 online could completely save money, because
that
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
the cost of online
books
Use synonyms
 is more affordable than
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
paper
books
Use synonyms
.
Moreover
Linking Words
, it is easier to
people
Use synonyms
 to carry their
books
Use synonyms
 in their pockets wherever they go . Al The reason
behind
Change preposition
apply
show examples
that
Correct word choice
why
show examples
 newspapers these days are not crucial
like
Correct word choice
as
show examples
 before,
it
Correct your spelling
is
show examples
 because the major sources,
specially
Replace the word
especially
show examples
 the virtual videos
in
Change preposition
on
show examples
 social media and others
in
Change preposition
on
show examples
 television.
In addition
Linking Words
, with the quick developments,
people
Use synonyms
 are busy with huge tasks throughout their days, so not everyone
have
Change the verb form
has
show examples
 the convenient time to buy a new one from the stores every single day . The improvement includes many aspects.
Correct your spelling
One
show examples
On
Correct your spelling
One
show examples
 of them is the
changing
Replace the word
change
show examples
 in information channels. To sum it up,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
society will give more attention to
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
online
books
Use synonyms
 and newspapers which are more convenient to
what
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
the
world
Change noun form
world's
show examples
 direction .
Submitted by nktjudy on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: