There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, . describe the complaints that have been made . say why the reception area is important . suggest how the reception area could be improved

Dear sir/Madam I am writing
this
letter to inform you of the complaints received about the
reception
and to discuss the steps required to overcome that issue.
Firstly
, we received many complaints on
reception
from our visitors.
Initially
, I want to highlight them
first
. The receptionists have not responded well
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most of the visitor's requests as lack of information from higher management. Sometimes, often changes in the schedule
also
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one of the
reason
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.
Reception
plays an important role in collecting information from management and sharing it with the visitors as per schedule, and
to make
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any required changes and
alligned
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aligned
according to that. To reduce no of complaints, the management has to increase the human resources at
reception
to execute the
works
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as
smooth
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as possible, and by using workstations to plan the schedule and
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implement
imlplement
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implement
them according to that
instead
of using
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paper work
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in the
reception
.
Finally
,
by
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recruiting
the
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good communication skills person and
assign
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them
at
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reception
could resolve the issue. Yours Sincerely, Niranjan Reddy K.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • complaints
  • reception area
  • unwelcoming
  • signage
  • aesthetic appeal
  • directional signage
  • ticketing system
  • professionalism
  • feedback system
  • continuous improvement
  • welcoming atmosphere
  • efficient
  • clear signage
  • comfortable seating
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