There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, . describe the complaints that have been made . say why the reception area is important . suggest how the reception area could be improved

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Dear sir/Madam I am writing
this
letter to inform you of the complaints received about the
reception
and to discuss the steps required to overcome that issue.
Firstly
, we received many complaints on
reception
from our visitors.
Initially
, I want to highlight them
first
. The receptionists have not responded well to most of the visitor's requests as lack of information from higher management. Sometimes, often changes in the schedule are
also
one of the reasons.
Reception
plays an essential role in collecting information from management, sharing it with the visitors per schedule, making any required changes and aligning according to that. The management has to increase the human resources at
reception
to execute the work as smoothly as possible, and by providing workstations to plan the schedule and implement them
accordingly
instead
of using paperwork in the
reception
.
Finally
, recruiting someone with good communication skills and assigning them to
reception
could resolve the issue. Yours Sincerely, Niranjan Reddy K.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • complaints
  • reception area
  • unwelcoming
  • signage
  • aesthetic appeal
  • directional signage
  • ticketing system
  • professionalism
  • feedback system
  • continuous improvement
  • welcoming atmosphere
  • efficient
  • clear signage
  • comfortable seating
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