Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: • suggest someone who deserves the reward • mention what they have done to help the community • say what reward you would like to give this person

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing
this
letter regarding the prize distribution that you are giving to one of the deserving people in society. Here, we have a name of a person in our group who is providing a great contribution to our community. Our young primary school teacher is teaching poor students who can not afford the additional tuition fees.
Additionally
, these children are weak in their studies because their parents are not educated and some of them are working with their families.
Moreover
, he is helping the bright future of these kids, as a consequence, our country will get educated people in a few years.
Therefore
,
this
reward should honour him who is deserving more than any other candidate.
Additionally
, the whole community agrees with
this
decision. I hope you would take a decision after considering all factors. Yours sincerely, Gagandeep Kaur
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