Some people think tourism should be banned while some disagree. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
nowadays, some
people
believe that government should stop people
to travel in different countries
. others think that tourism
is a basic need of countries
to develop in future. In this
should discuss both sides and give your personal point of view.
To begin
with, individuals think that tourism
should be banned in their country
because of several reasons. Firstly
,tourism
does not pay attention to their rule and regulations. In other
words
, the majority of tourism
does not follow rule
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rules
such
as traffic rules. For instance
, I live in Canada,but tourists who come on the
visit visa, so they Correct article usage
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does
not follow the traffic rule which Change the verb form
do
cause
accidents.Change the verb form
causes
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Furthermore
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Furthermore
people
believe that tourism
should be banned among
their Change preposition
in
countries
because the crime rate is Correct your spelling
frequently
fequently
increasing in their Correct your spelling
frequently
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countries
counries
. Correct your spelling
countries
In other
words
,people
who travel in different countries
also
there is hand tourism
increasing the crime rate. For instance
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rate is 15% increases after they free visa to Add an article
the crime
travels
.
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travel
On the other hand
, some people
argue that tourism
should benefit to
our Change preposition
apply
countries
.secondly
, tourism
provide
economic growth in Change the verb form
provides
countries
. In other
words
, tourism
can give a
business to our Correct article usage
apply
country
and help to growth
economically. Replace the word
grow
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, Maldives,
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apply
small
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a small
country
, but their
government free Correct pronoun usage
its
visa
to help Fix the agreement mistake
visas
their
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them
economically
. Replace the word
economies
Moreover
, Some people
argue that tourism
should not be banned at cost because it only way to show beauty
of our Add an article
the beauty
country
to
Change preposition
apply
tourism
. In other
words
, it is ideal
way to present Add an article
an ideal
the ideal
beauty
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the beauty
our
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of our
country
.
Lastly
, some people
think that tourism
should be banned. others argue that tourism
is should not be bannad
. In my opinion, Correct your spelling
banned
tourism
should not be because tourism
provide
economic growth and only way to present the beauty Change the verb form
provides
our
Change preposition
of our
country
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