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“Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?”

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Dear Sam, I hope you and your family are doing well and your renovation of the flat does not take all your free time. I am writing to you because I am selling the goods in my house and decided to offer them to you. The reason why I decided to sell the furniture from my home is a renovation.
Accordingly
, all chairs, tables, night tables, doors, and closets will be sold.
In addition
, all the furniture is in a good condition and not broken.
However
, there is only one problem with the door of the night table.
Thus
, I will give it to you for free. Unfortunately,
this
 week I will be working overtime and cannot show you the furniture.
Then
, I would be grateful to see you
next
 week at any time to show you all the stuff I am going to sell. I hope that my suggestion will be interesting for you and we will find something to make your flat more comfortable. Warm wishes, Yakov
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