Nowadays young people mostly learn by reading books or watching movies and TV shows ,rather than personal experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays many parents tend to teach their children by reading books and watching movies, rather than real-life
experiences
. I have both sides of
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viewpoint. Learning through
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real-life
experiences
is a good
way
which leads to many benefits I will mention in
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essay. On the one hand, youngster today do not
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solve their problem immediately, when they face a problem, they often ask their parents or friends for help and can not do it by themselves.
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studying at school. A
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number of teachers still teach their students in a traditional
way
. Students must just have attention
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knowing knowledge what they learn from school.
For example
, if youngsters have a problem, they just know one
way
to solve it. It may be right in
this
situation, but in some cases,
this
solution
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not suitable
In addition
, young people build their confidence and independence
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thanks to real-life
experiences
to deal with any problems. It creates their own thinking, own opinions
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opinions
though through many different situations in social
On the other hand
, they can
also
learn by reading books or watching movies. They can see some situations which appear in some movies originate from daily life. They can learn and imitate
this
solution and use it in their own case. But they
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to choose the best
way
and suitable with their solution. In conclusion, there are many ways for parents to educate children. But real-life
experiences
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pretty good for many generations later.
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young people today close to
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communication and
also
society.
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