Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: Explain the reasons for the noise. Apologise. Describe what action you will take.

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Dear Mr Smith, I received your letter regarding the complaint you had about the noise in our flat. I am writing

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letter to let you know that there are wedding rituals taking place at our home as it is my sister's marriage next week. Many relatives have arrived in the past few days and they are doing rehearsals for the big day. I am really sorry for the disturbance that it caused to you and your family

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the loud music. We really did not want to hurt anyone and we understand that it can be disturbing for anyone. If we were at your place we would have

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complained.

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, I assure you that we will take care of the volume and noise from our onwards. We will ensure that all the curtains and doors are closed

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rehearsing so that the neighbours don't get annoyed and can get good sleep. Thank you for your patience and I am really sorry for the inconvenience caused. Yours sincerely, Arthur

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task achievement

In the second paragraph, 'due to the loud music' could be replaced with 'because of the loud music' for a slightly more natural sentence flow.

coherence cohesion

Ensure the paragraphing is distinct and separates different ideas clearly to enhance readability.

task achievement

You have clearly explained the reason for the noise, apologized, and promised an action plan to address the issue. This shows a complete response to each part of the task.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is suitable and polite, which is appropriate for the situation.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a logical structure, with each paragraph addressing a specific part of the task prompt.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately formal and correctly used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

171 words

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