Some believe that traffic problems in cities can best be resolved by investing in urban infrastructure while others feel there are superior solutions. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Many policymakers feel that the optimal counter to
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issues in urban areas is increased funding for
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. In my opinion, though
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funding may have a marginal effect, there are other, potentially more impactful, regulations. Supporters of investment in
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contend it is a direct and pragmatic solution. As
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become larger, they face inevitable
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problems caused by overcrowding and deteriorating roads. Improving the existing
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can include repaving these roads to reduce accidents and slow driving, building additional public transportation lines for subways, creating biking lanes, widening streets, constructing overpasses, and so on. Combined, the theoretical result of these changes will be an alleviation of
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strain on transport systems.
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, in practice,
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large
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as New York City, rarely produce any actual difference in
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conditions as they cannot keep pace with growing populations.
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, governments must consider more drastic policies. The
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reform would be to ban or severely limit the use of private vehicles. A good example of
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would be in certain European
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bans or raised taxes on automobile purchases. Since cars occupy the majority of the space on roads, while often only transporting one or two individuals, they are the least efficient and slowest modes of travel.
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, governments can subtly shift housing policies to engender dramatic effects.
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of allowing
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to build upwards, through skyscrapers and tall apartment buildings, they can limit the number of floors on buildings to encourage a more horizontal cityscape. The result of
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would be to spread out workplaces and lower congestion levels generally. In conclusion, there is little doubt that improved
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could alleviate
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congestion in
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to an extent;
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, the best remedy is to pass laws concerning private vehicles and housing. Governments should implement these long-term policies over short-term fixes.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban infrastructure
  • traffic congestion
  • bottlenecks
  • public transportation systems
  • cycling lanes
  • pedestrian pathways
  • telecommuting
  • smart traffic management
  • AI and IoT
  • carpooling
  • ride-sharing services
  • vehicular traffic
  • alternative means of transport
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