An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country

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Dear Bob, I am extremely delighted to know that you

finally

decided to visit Lebanon and I want to help you make a memorable experience.

First

, I would recommend you visit during the late spring and early summer seasons between May and July because the weather will be warm with low humidity and a light breeze.

Moreover

, during

this

time you will get the chance to have a once-in-a-lifetime experience where you can Ski in the mountains and

then

drive down to the coast for a swim in a matter of an hour. As for the accommodation, there are great options at very affordable prices and I recommend that you stay around the coast of Beirut which is close to major attractions. I suggest that you book at one of the boutique family-run hotels to support local tourism. I know you are into history,

hence

I recommend that we visit the Roman temples in Baalbek, the Jetta mangroves which are one of the oldest grottoes in the world, and others like Byblos and Tyre historical sites. A trip to Lebanon would not be complete without a food tour and I will make sure you get to taste the best shawarma and falafel sandwich. Keep me posted on your plan and I am looking forward to welcoming you to our country. Yours sincerely, Houssam

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

223 words

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