Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Concerning medical problems

such

as diabetes,some people believe that food that contains a lot of

sugar

should be sold at higher prices to reduce

sugar

consumption. I personally,

however

, disagree with

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an opinion, because it is not practical to decide how much the

price

should be raised for each product, and because the effect of

price

change would be limited similar to other highly taxed commodities

such

as tobacco.

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of all,

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range of sugary products,

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the amount of

sugar

contained in them differs significantly from

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product to product.

Therefore

, it is extremely difficult to determine the method of

price

adjusting.

For example

, cold drink

such

as coke contains relatively much

sugar

in the

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amount

, whereas the percentage of

sugar

is not higher as water dilutes it.

On the other hand

, the proportion of sweet ingredients in candy is high, even though the gram of

sugar

for each candy is minimal. If the government taxed in accordance with the amount of

sugar

, we could not buy seven-up at the vending machine because of the sharp

price

raising, but it is not acceptable for not only many big beverage companies, but

also

general consumers.

Secondly

, as can be seen in the cigarette industry,

price

raising might not make

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result as expected. In spite of several tax increases, smokers never stop going to tobacco shops because they can not quit smoking. Like nicotine in tobacco,

sugar

has an addictive effect, so people would continue to buy sweet snacks despite significant raising in

price

or imposing

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high taxes. In summary, the proposal to

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the

price

of sweets is not practical and effective. Nowadays, more and more people are caring about their health

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and improving their diet by eating more proteins or vegetables. To reduce serious health concerns by

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of

sugar

, continual education regarding healthy lifestyles is the most essential.