Many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online and give your opinion.

In the contemporary era, the

internet

has

vital

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impacts

in

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many parts of our lives. among all these changes, traditional shopping is been replaced with online shopping which can bring both upsides and downsides.

Although

I believe that the

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advantages

advatanges

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advantages

of online shopping outweigh its disadvantages, we should consider the potential problems of

this

new modern method. on the one hand, with the advent of the

internet

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,internet

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most of our tasks and duties have

performed

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been performed

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in a

more

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easier way. through

the

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online shopping, you can access so many

shops

and

its

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their

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products

at the same

time

and compare

availabe

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available

much

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choices which shopowners provide for customers.

moreover

, in the past, you must spend a great deal of

time

and money to travel to shopping

stores

and face some possible issues

such

as traffic

congestions

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or

owercorwded

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overcrowded

shopping

centers

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.

however

, these days you can save your

time

and money

through

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by

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doing your shopping via the

internet

. nowadays most

of

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products

and goods are available through

the

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shopping websites and applications.

on the other hand

,

although

online shopping is an effective way of purchasing

individuals

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individuals'

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needs and buying essential commodities

,

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if the

internet

faces technical problems,

this

method completely

stop

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stops

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working and

also

people encounter

with

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several difficulties. for solving

such

these

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problems, the

infrastructures

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of the technology and the

internet

should be improved in an effective trend

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regularly

reguarly

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regularly

. the other common problem which every individual can encounter through online shopping is the low quality of

delivered

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the delivered

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product

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products

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. there are many

shops

and supermarkets

among

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on

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the

internet

and some related websites and mobile applications introduce these

stores

that produce many commodities

for instance

clothes, food

products

, mobile and computer gadgets and so on. with the diversity of

such

stores

, people should investigate and compare these places in order to find the best seller who

provide

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the

best-quality

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best quality

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products

with the lower price among the others. in conclusion, there is no denying

to

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this

conviction that online shopping brings many benefits to our lives and

beside

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the wide range of

shops

and

stores

, we can save a remarkable amount of our

time

and money.

however

, there is a need for every individual to compare all these

products

and

shops

together to find the most appropriate choice for themselves.