In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

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of lives.

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will be automated.

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the driver

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driver

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will be no

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as well as there will be only commuters. In my point of view,

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phenomenon will be more beneficial than drawbacks. On the one hand,

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of all,the major

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of automated

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less chance of accidents.

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,

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can safely travel without any headache as well as they can do anything including sleeping, reading and listening , because they will not have to drive themselves.

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, the possibility of collision will be declined.

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, driverless

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are

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for those who can not dive by themselves, especially, senior citizens and disabled

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can easily travel safely by themselves.

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, automated driving will

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to reach one place to another place.

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, job holders and pupils

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to do their job

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time.

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,one of the obvious disadvantages of

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Automobiles

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vehicles

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difficult to comprehend.

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,a vast number of

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are technophobic.

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, it is hard for them to understand and control

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, the fees

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automobiles

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will be costly.

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, since the automobile

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up of advanced technology its maintenance cost will be higher than that of

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a driver. To summarize, there

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advantage

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driverless

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and

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think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.