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A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear sir or Madam, I found your idea of including readers' contributions in the article fascinating. ,
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 I would like to take
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 opportunity to describe a
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 that impressed me. Hope you find it helpful.
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 prince is a
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 written by french writer Antoine de Saint Exupery in the French language . It was one of the best-selling in history and the
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 most translated work ever published. The story follows a young prince who visits various planets in space ,including earth seeking wisdom. In his journey, he discovers the unpredictable nature of adults. What is extraordinary about
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 , is that it gives a great insight into the meaning of life
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 it is known as a children's
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. The
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 attracts children because it mixes real-world elements with a fantasy world. ,
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 it catches adults' attention since they can see themselves and their surrounding world in characters.
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, the prince takes readers back to childlike innocence and creativity that a lot of adults tend to lose as they grow older. In the
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, the author throws light on those complicated matters which we forget in the race of becoming grown-ups.
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, I suppose anyone who reads
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 , will find it appealing. Actually,
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 incredible story touches readers' minds by representing the most complicated concepts of life with simple and friendly language. Sincerely yours, Razieh
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